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My first story of yours. Excellent, certain...Tom, <br /><br />My first story of yours. Excellent, certainly won't be my last story of yours.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14897384823687665242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-54573883241076116932012-04-20T15:16:40.091+01:002012-04-20T15:16:40.091+01:00That was a good one Uncle Tom...I enjoyed the twis...That was a good one Uncle Tom...I enjoyed the twisted ending! ABAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-37751419760886943112012-04-20T05:57:45.644+01:002012-04-20T05:57:45.644+01:00Nice one! I enjoyed it!Nice one! I enjoyed it!Noelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09530802853059083427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-5758373284188967902012-04-20T05:13:13.559+01:002012-04-20T05:13:13.559+01:00Great concept, I loved it, I think you should add ...Great concept, I loved it, I think you should add more back story, make it much, much longer. Maybe add a scene before, where they cop from said dealer. This is such a really great vignette, these bones deserve more flesh!xandernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-74076429534148583612012-04-20T03:25:13.357+01:002012-04-20T03:25:13.357+01:00Your stories are like that last piece of BBq'd...Your stories are like that last piece of BBq'd steak that you leave on your plate until your meal is done, so you can enjoy that delisious,savory morsel one last time.Fine job as usual Tom.You've turned me into a"Tom Pitts Print Junkie"!Keep up the great work!Kenneth LaButtenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-79969426649269762862012-04-19T23:36:56.802+01:002012-04-19T23:36:56.802+01:00Enjoyed the dialogue and the image of the rundown ...Enjoyed the dialogue and the image of the rundown apartment. Nicely done!Bruce Harrisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-88754028437800888832012-04-19T21:41:29.110+01:002012-04-19T21:41:29.110+01:00Poor bastard. Good one, man.Poor bastard. Good one, man.Court Merriganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02674875918626755289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-55678353252541313632012-04-19T15:20:26.780+01:002012-04-19T15:20:26.780+01:00Cold as a surgeon's scalpel. Cuts just like o...Cold as a surgeon's scalpel. Cuts just like one too. You're an evil man, Tom Pitts. Cool.AJ Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02765836513403665199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-65711076485463989872012-04-19T15:00:05.164+01:002012-04-19T15:00:05.164+01:00Another gem, Mr. Pitts...Another gem, Mr. Pitts...Joe Cliffordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00292903377618770678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-79748711305125928742012-04-19T13:47:23.532+01:002012-04-19T13:47:23.532+01:00That does it! I'm through with dope for good!...That does it! I'm through with dope for good! But...I'm hooked on your writing now.Madam Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00136166772469538966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-34543424121225918252012-04-19T13:35:14.598+01:002012-04-19T13:35:14.598+01:00Tom- first story of yours I have read, and it was ...Tom- first story of yours I have read, and it was a good one. Will certainly be reading more. The dialogue was excellent and I did not see the twist coming at the end.Sean Patrick Reardonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14051252366031997054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-12080677445604695502012-04-19T11:02:37.612+01:002012-04-19T11:02:37.612+01:00Great tale Tom. Your dialogue was spot on and then...Great tale Tom. Your dialogue was spot on and then pulled a wicked twist. <br /><br />The dignity ship had obviously long ago sailed.<br /><br />KudosGraham Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15561493204302079903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-9385343530547686662012-04-19T10:53:15.093+01:002012-04-19T10:53:15.093+01:00Made me laugh this one. Your stories never disapp...Made me laugh this one. Your stories never disappoint!!!kawiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15790492246359957874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-12605893453499158852012-04-19T09:20:23.101+01:002012-04-19T09:20:23.101+01:00Enjoyed this one, Tom. A well written story with ...Enjoyed this one, Tom. A well written story with some great dialogue. Well done!<br /><br /><br />Thanks for your patience. A holiday out of the blue threw things into chaos. Appreciate your understanding.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00231973272530266336noreply@blogger.com