tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post5422172950282218372..comments2024-03-08T08:13:52.256+00:00Comments on The Flash Fiction Offensive: Butch and Ed's Night Out by Kevin AthertonDavid Barberhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00231973272530266336noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-47120602774734865472010-12-18T22:20:16.389+00:002010-12-18T22:20:16.389+00:00Loads of great lines in this. Beaut writing.Loads of great lines in this. Beaut writing.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-14878807759436756642010-07-10T19:38:18.090+01:002010-07-10T19:38:18.090+01:00Mr. Funk,
Thanks for your comments. After reading...Mr. Funk,<br /><br />Thanks for your comments. After reading your quality work, I'm encouraged to write like a goon on meth. I think I'll do that right now.<br /><br />KevinAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-56235786715757012272010-07-07T23:48:17.965+01:002010-07-07T23:48:17.965+01:00Horrible. I just about loved it.
Artless at times...Horrible. I just about loved it.<br /><br />Artless at times, but it doesn't matter, Kevin - this story fights so damn dirty. It has more layers of sophistication and clever phrases than most weaker works, and each of those layers is lead or blood or shit or powder. And the concept is delicious sewage.<br /><br />I really feel soiled. Thanks.M C Funkhttp://www.matthewfunk.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-67911213738711655602010-07-03T15:34:43.354+01:002010-07-03T15:34:43.354+01:00Thanks for the comments---much appreciated.Thanks for the comments---much appreciated.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-34990165928581418822010-07-03T00:19:46.821+01:002010-07-03T00:19:46.821+01:00also enjoyed this- very nice work, nice characters...also enjoyed this- very nice work, nice characters...Bill Babernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-25425709254950174812010-06-30T12:53:37.882+01:002010-06-30T12:53:37.882+01:00I ain’t never had a live one —must be somethin’ wi...I ain’t never had a live one —must be somethin’ with ‘em squirmin’ under you <br /><br />AND <br /><br />then I coulda killed her nice and slow like she deserved. EPIC LINES.<br /><br />A gritty ride with cool flow and development in a short amount of space. Good read. Send the man some food.Christopher Pimentalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09425426301377689603noreply@blogger.com