tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post5914583972321800828..comments2024-03-08T08:13:52.256+00:00Comments on The Flash Fiction Offensive: Two Burgers with Fries and Coke by Erin Cole...David Barberhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00231973272530266336noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-76493870031179556332011-04-03T15:35:31.565+01:002011-04-03T15:35:31.565+01:00Great job, Erin. Very entertaining.Great job, Erin. Very entertaining.kurtnewtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18051603523265529385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-42310061939114739512011-04-02T18:31:26.007+01:002011-04-02T18:31:26.007+01:00top rate stuff, they make quite the pair!top rate stuff, they make quite the pair!Bill Babernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-82538968441984894002011-03-31T08:43:12.551+01:002011-03-31T08:43:12.551+01:00Brilliant - really enjoyed that. Nice work!Brilliant - really enjoyed that. Nice work!Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14581854897484618741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-3121300064929980262011-03-31T03:19:37.245+01:002011-03-31T03:19:37.245+01:00Gritty and alive. Erin, well done!Gritty and alive. Erin, well done!Lydia Kanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00484415427764822386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-56362743417495534232011-03-30T22:42:48.799+01:002011-03-30T22:42:48.799+01:00Such a great write! I've just finished reading...Such a great write! I've just finished reading your poetic horror over at The Feardom, and then you reverse the game with two Burgers With Fries And Coke. Just shows what a talented writer you are to be able to flip those tables and enter a different state.<br /><br />Mike mentioned Sailor and Lula - oh yes!Lily Childshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15861288507716873813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-25309613203825111742011-03-30T01:11:46.947+01:002011-03-30T01:11:46.947+01:00Erin, you rock. I needed this tonight.Erin, you rock. I needed this tonight.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-81590038208842435992011-03-30T01:11:27.755+01:002011-03-30T01:11:27.755+01:00Erin, you can pull on the gritty redneck charm! Lo...Erin, you can pull on the gritty redneck charm! Loved this "Antoine could smile like a crocodile, and when he put his eyes into it, he looked crazy too." Hee! They made out with burger & fries, a good 3 mil, and ditched the body (like it was all pre-planned or sumthun). Yeehaa!Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-41622301605216314502011-03-29T22:18:09.053+01:002011-03-29T22:18:09.053+01:00Erin, thank YOU for sending it to me. Great piece...Erin, thank YOU for sending it to me. Great piece!David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-39782811756640692752011-03-29T22:15:10.720+01:002011-03-29T22:15:10.720+01:00Thanks for all the great comments, everyone. I'...Thanks for all the great comments, everyone. I'm thrilled you liked it!<br /><br />Thanks for showcasing my work, David.EChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09359075647077590741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-80615597441574107762011-03-29T15:57:55.692+01:002011-03-29T15:57:55.692+01:00That was a beautiful ride Erin!That was a beautiful ride Erin!Harryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628269009060185397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-17269373473395961042011-03-29T09:03:32.607+01:002011-03-29T09:03:32.607+01:00Great writing, you really set the scene well at th...Great writing, you really set the scene well at the start. Pulp at its best.Charlie Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11210253827591256777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-61752969854866303492011-03-29T04:29:21.848+01:002011-03-29T04:29:21.848+01:00I really hope they went back for their cokes!I really hope they went back for their cokes!Jesse Leenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-51207855555471675812011-03-29T01:33:29.751+01:002011-03-29T01:33:29.751+01:00Reminded me very much - and this is high praise - ...Reminded me very much - and this is high praise - of Barry Gifford's Sailor and Lula. Loved Lily's voice.Mike MInernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-14310874191068435882011-03-29T01:22:21.896+01:002011-03-29T01:22:21.896+01:00"one of those with chipped pastel paint and a..."one of those with chipped pastel paint and an old, angry woman sitting out front eating a corndog." <br /><br />That set the tone for me. Humour and violence. Like ketchup and hot sauce. Such an enjoyable read Erin.Chris Alliniottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04094925215735680849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-66894945375787558342011-03-28T22:55:21.036+01:002011-03-28T22:55:21.036+01:00Grit and humour. Now that's a combo to go. Exc...Grit and humour. Now that's a combo to go. Excellent as always, Erin.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-43546054373505816342011-03-28T22:04:22.983+01:002011-03-28T22:04:22.983+01:00Cracking fun! You should do more of this!Cracking fun! You should do more of this!Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-18885426153446295052011-03-28T21:44:16.443+01:002011-03-28T21:44:16.443+01:00Wonderful tone, with little quirks throughout. The...Wonderful tone, with little quirks throughout. The most fun I've read in a long while.Benjamin Sobieckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343962892479384825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-55850832872106515962011-03-28T20:46:41.841+01:002011-03-28T20:46:41.841+01:00Erin, this was great. It was was gritty and hard ...Erin, this was great. It was was gritty and hard and reminded me a little of that great movie, True Romance. I know this isn't your normal genre/style but you pulled this off with style. Top marks for a top story.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00231973272530266336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-32423852042508823522011-03-28T20:46:18.183+01:002011-03-28T20:46:18.183+01:00this is freaking Hi-larious. I love how all the ac...this is freaking Hi-larious. I love how all the action comes out of nowhere and they manage to get out with their food - to cool for school - a real joy ride this one EC.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.com