tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post7393830556169864000..comments2024-03-08T08:13:52.256+00:00Comments on The Flash Fiction Offensive: Hitmen and Chop Shops by Jaie D. MaclaneDavid Barberhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00231973272530266336noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-5770933050957625122011-07-15T12:42:15.035+01:002011-07-15T12:42:15.035+01:00Great story; just loved the grittiness of it all. ...Great story; just loved the grittiness of it all. And the bits of humor were gold.<br />Cheers!ETERNITY KIDZhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11458160282963278995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-64659270157790837162011-05-19T22:31:31.069+01:002011-05-19T22:31:31.069+01:00Ha - brilliant!Ha - brilliant!Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14581854897484618741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-44696466687207042002011-05-19T02:04:14.323+01:002011-05-19T02:04:14.323+01:00Thanks guys! My internet's been puked out here...Thanks guys! My internet's been puked out here for a while so I didn't get a chance to get on here and truly say thanks for all the great commentary y'all gave. Really, it's you guys who need to be commended. The talent on this site is fuckin' insane! Keep up the great work. I love reading you guys!Jaie D. Maclanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13820857922403729666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-8944772112984668372011-05-19T00:59:46.833+01:002011-05-19T00:59:46.833+01:00The highest compliment I can give flash fiction is...The highest compliment I can give flash fiction is that it's so well done, the characters so perfectly drawn, that I'm pissed when it's over and I desperately want to read the back story. This piece is exactly that. And I'm jealous I didn't write it. Extremely well done.Trey R. Barkerhttp://www.treyrbarker.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-62061782582116516072011-05-18T01:57:11.766+01:002011-05-18T01:57:11.766+01:00just f'ing perfect- great flash!just f'ing perfect- great flash!Bill Babernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-302821375997771742011-05-17T19:32:54.886+01:002011-05-17T19:32:54.886+01:00Stealers Wheel! Wow, hadn't thought about them...Stealers Wheel! Wow, hadn't thought about them for a long time. "I got the feeling that something ain't right..."<br /><br />Great story, very entertaining.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14897384823687665242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-56779199386694478302011-05-17T17:45:08.133+01:002011-05-17T17:45:08.133+01:00"Smile for me, Benny."
Loved it. That w..."Smile for me, Benny."<br /><br />Loved it. That was good as gold.Thomas Pluckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17008022962076648740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-54007438558753452922011-05-17T16:50:24.056+01:002011-05-17T16:50:24.056+01:00Lean, mean, gritty. Nice piece of work. Can'...Lean, mean, gritty. Nice piece of work. Can't wait to read more of your brass-knuckle kind of storytelling.Michael A. Kechulahttp://www.booksforabuck.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-45986885312612338542011-05-17T15:57:49.528+01:002011-05-17T15:57:49.528+01:00Dark and funny at the same time. Enjoyed it.Dark and funny at the same time. Enjoyed it.Gordonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-31826813155767411502011-05-17T04:12:14.563+01:002011-05-17T04:12:14.563+01:00Dig the style. LP version? Gotta do it.Dig the style. LP version? Gotta do it.Mike Wilkersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00771502395254223219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-36828693256854128502011-05-17T03:28:43.942+01:002011-05-17T03:28:43.942+01:00Excellent! Thank you for sharing.Excellent! Thank you for sharing.Paul Salvettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11818202201018195312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-38563382538953364602011-05-16T22:21:06.058+01:002011-05-16T22:21:06.058+01:00Gritty little short. And being a fan of Stealers W...Gritty little short. And being a fan of Stealers Wheel I give major bonus points.David Cranmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04749857752139212888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-36346576430918806242011-05-16T21:56:26.318+01:002011-05-16T21:56:26.318+01:00Wow! Brilliant piece of fiction this - nothing was...Wow! Brilliant piece of fiction this - nothing wasted and nothing over-stated. Great read! (and I'd like to read more...!)SueHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11394307650434614637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-1216677720901671872011-05-16T21:27:23.099+01:002011-05-16T21:27:23.099+01:00This is a fine piece of writing, Jaie. It's g...This is a fine piece of writing, Jaie. It's gritty and noir and I like the <i>Tarantino</i> reference at the end.<br /><br />Great work and I hope to see more from you, if not here then certainly around the other webzines!David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00231973272530266336noreply@blogger.com