tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post7892467136172755991..comments2024-03-08T08:13:52.256+00:00Comments on The Flash Fiction Offensive: Suppertime by Peter Farris.David Barberhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00231973272530266336noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-51427457983273892312011-08-18T16:02:01.091+01:002011-08-18T16:02:01.091+01:00that's some good stuff right there!that's some good stuff right there!Bill Babernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-43922566844162802702011-08-12T13:50:10.493+01:002011-08-12T13:50:10.493+01:00Interesting he's mindful of snakes but content...Interesting he's mindful of snakes but content with the alligators. Lots of rolling detail for such a short piece. Nice.Jaie D. Maclanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13820857922403729666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-34942764199229686352011-08-12T03:42:42.398+01:002011-08-12T03:42:42.398+01:00Awesome! Love the atmosphere; that's a great l...Awesome! Love the atmosphere; that's a great little story.William Dylan Powellhttp://www.darktexas.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-16778999546831183062011-08-11T18:26:16.179+01:002011-08-11T18:26:16.179+01:00"But I’m not.
I’m naked."
Those line..."But I’m not. <br /><br /><br />I’m naked."<br /><br />Those lines set this apart from the standard "psycho killer" story.<br /><br />Your build-up to the end was very well done, and the descriptions are fantastic ("southern drawls as thick as oil" is memorable).<br /><br />Great story.Chris Alliniottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04094925215735680849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-69819029815962325542011-08-11T17:19:32.784+01:002011-08-11T17:19:32.784+01:00Perfect timing, considering I just started watchin...Perfect timing, considering I just started watching SWAMP PEOPLE last night.<br /><br />Nice work, Pete.Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10070278104646895235noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-30765626987386806202011-08-11T16:43:25.714+01:002011-08-11T16:43:25.714+01:00Sharp. Tight. Sublime.Sharp. Tight. Sublime.Groovydaz40https://www.blogger.com/profile/17120905794620919573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-1488359144161132312011-08-10T19:06:05.696+01:002011-08-10T19:06:05.696+01:00I enjoyed the voice of this piece and the style - ...I enjoyed the voice of this piece and the style - choppy good, everyword counted, and had a killer wrap up.<br />Great work!EChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09359075647077590741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-47218038349065011462011-08-10T17:33:58.878+01:002011-08-10T17:33:58.878+01:00Thanks for reading and commenting, y'all. It&#...Thanks for reading and commenting, y'all. It's much appreciated.Peter Farrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08282435407442494330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-1035122390818742252011-08-10T15:01:23.221+01:002011-08-10T15:01:23.221+01:00Short and bittersweet. Well done!Short and bittersweet. Well done!Thomas Pluckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17008022962076648740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-91060220133788793702011-08-10T14:56:50.979+01:002011-08-10T14:56:50.979+01:00Liked that and would read more of this character. ...Liked that and would read more of this character. Especially enjoyed your writing style.Sean Patrick Reardonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14051252366031997054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-58674397692171285942011-08-10T14:53:00.514+01:002011-08-10T14:53:00.514+01:00So much in a few words. Great job.So much in a few words. Great job.Glenn Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14925047417101856802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-71672892679155803022011-08-10T14:10:05.380+01:002011-08-10T14:10:05.380+01:00niceniceSteve Weddlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03876211586767139613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-23327157344622742052011-08-10T13:45:14.843+01:002011-08-10T13:45:14.843+01:00Harsh and sad and beaut.Harsh and sad and beaut.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-1875678968336766132011-08-10T13:06:13.496+01:002011-08-10T13:06:13.496+01:00Nasty southern buggy feel to this one. Too bad he ...Nasty southern buggy feel to this one. Too bad he decided to feed his bad self to the gators - he'd be an interesting character to keep around for a little more excitement.Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-8487342207960473042011-08-10T11:35:09.890+01:002011-08-10T11:35:09.890+01:00Oh my, didn't expect that! A crime writer who ...Oh my, didn't expect that! A crime writer who kills! ...and what a way to go, standing there like bait. Well done.Fiona Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11327414379413053096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-18254422082132815172011-08-10T11:22:04.156+01:002011-08-10T11:22:04.156+01:00I really liked this piece, Peter. It had menace b...I really liked this piece, Peter. It had menace but also sadness. I liked the way you made me feel slightly sorry for a killer.<br /><br />Great writing. Well done.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00231973272530266336noreply@blogger.com