tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post8064998657046316285..comments2024-03-08T08:13:52.256+00:00Comments on The Flash Fiction Offensive: The Blood, the Shattered Glass and All the Rest by Keith RawsonDavid Barberhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00231973272530266336noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-20488323641029367042009-07-21T12:27:58.795+01:002009-07-21T12:27:58.795+01:00The best last line I've ever read!The best last line I've ever read!Al Tuchernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-37875123320982468652009-07-21T08:35:31.535+01:002009-07-21T08:35:31.535+01:00Well hell, that was fun...Well hell, that was fun...Jake Hinksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12959106997436699346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-10834421226628536302009-07-20T23:42:03.205+01:002009-07-20T23:42:03.205+01:00I'm promoting this in the latest Interlude at ...I'm promoting this in the latest Interlude at A Twist Of Noir.<br /><br />As I said there, didn't you just know it had to turn out like that? And what's with Meg just sitting there, almost taunting him, with her mother (who you knew was told my Meg herself about her little experiment) drinking?<br /><br />Great as always, Keith.Christopher Granthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581243409967241320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-20544997735908986732009-07-20T20:01:08.053+01:002009-07-20T20:01:08.053+01:00Slap! Loved that! Perfect example of Flash Fiction...Slap! Loved that! Perfect example of Flash Fiction done best. Nice hat tip at Pulp Serenade too, by the way.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-36752367693098747282009-07-20T14:07:02.639+01:002009-07-20T14:07:02.639+01:00Thanks for all the comments, folks, I always enjoy...Thanks for all the comments, folks, I always enjoy the feed back.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06827652636843928373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-39609783001921770612009-07-20T00:17:37.320+01:002009-07-20T00:17:37.320+01:00Keith....another cracker, my man!Keith....another cracker, my man!Cameron Ashleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02600813332774987252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-84735994819888313232009-07-19T17:11:06.575+01:002009-07-19T17:11:06.575+01:00Don't get between a man and his booze. Another...Don't get between a man and his booze. Another awesome story buddy. Gritty and... sobering.Jason Dukehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00802767652502411067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-69911789619199108982009-07-19T16:56:05.725+01:002009-07-19T16:56:05.725+01:00What else do you expect? That had me in stitches....What else do you expect? That had me in stitches. What a perfect ending... resignation to the inevitable... with that last line we can practically see him wriggling deeper into the bottle... into the despair. Nice read, Keith.Christopher Pimentalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09425426301377689603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-22974505936354345532009-07-19T14:09:09.036+01:002009-07-19T14:09:09.036+01:00Mr. Rawson, you make me wanna get this novel finis...Mr. Rawson, you make me wanna get this novel finished so I can come back to the world of short stories. Another divine piece of filth.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05268979596402277128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-35167307789942200242009-07-19T13:36:58.185+01:002009-07-19T13:36:58.185+01:00Another good one, Keith.Another good one, Keith.Kenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10867894894515427035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-45969940237467678162009-07-19T06:12:43.027+01:002009-07-19T06:12:43.027+01:00The way the mother in law was staring at him it...The way the mother in law was staring at him it's a wonder he didn't feed her the glass when he caved. Nice work Keith.Lee Hugheshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10625970674709103188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-13465012238636034032009-07-19T06:01:47.326+01:002009-07-19T06:01:47.326+01:00Don't we all. I can feel the oozing desperatio...Don't we all. I can feel the oozing desperation.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-34079014673211486642009-07-19T04:59:00.741+01:002009-07-19T04:59:00.741+01:00Now I need a drink.Now I need a drink.Jimmy Callawayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13725548493403210066noreply@blogger.com