tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post8639071678605541464..comments2024-03-08T08:13:52.256+00:00Comments on The Flash Fiction Offensive: Kill Them All by David Harry Moss.David Barberhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00231973272530266336noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-9366817787975336172011-06-24T23:17:17.807+01:002011-06-24T23:17:17.807+01:00It was an odd choice for him to kill the young gir...It was an odd choice for him to kill the young girl at the end? Definitely gave me something to think about.<br />I liked what Mike Miner said also. "ogreish sun" indeed.Raymondnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-66517438369704460722011-06-22T19:34:32.462+01:002011-06-22T19:34:32.462+01:00Good writing, David.Good writing, David.Thomas Pluckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17008022962076648740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-48364157395235246282011-06-21T05:38:29.814+01:002011-06-21T05:38:29.814+01:00Good story. The fast pace matched the subject mat...Good story. The fast pace matched the subject matter well.Dana C. Kabelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13364961727027777878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-33853105030208375622011-06-21T01:56:20.807+01:002011-06-21T01:56:20.807+01:00Nice story. Don't comment often but I had to ...Nice story. Don't comment often but I had to tip my hat to you sirJohn Thompsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-74405470576353514922011-06-21T00:37:49.768+01:002011-06-21T00:37:49.768+01:00Loved the red, sizzling ogreish sun & hazy wav...Loved the red, sizzling ogreish sun & hazy wavy heat. Felt like I was there. I didn't think he'd kill the Iraqi girl. He sure paid them back for Sherri Lynn.Cindy Rosmushttp://blackpetalsks.tripod.com/yellowmama/index.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-30836406257685413452011-06-20T21:54:30.087+01:002011-06-20T21:54:30.087+01:00You have a good handle on this genre david. I like...You have a good handle on this genre david. I like your cooments on the politicians. Where are they and the rich bastards when soldiers lives are on the line. Well Done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00533184345345882921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-87286281680137544232011-06-20T19:07:23.996+01:002011-06-20T19:07:23.996+01:00Excellent work. Some really good descriptive writi...Excellent work. Some really good descriptive writing and a lot of action too.Groovydaz40https://www.blogger.com/profile/17120905794620919573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-16934958008783574722011-06-20T18:47:21.198+01:002011-06-20T18:47:21.198+01:00well written and had a lot of action in it.well written and had a lot of action in it.Sean Patrick Reardonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14051252366031997054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-4930295334039958482011-06-20T16:52:28.578+01:002011-06-20T16:52:28.578+01:00Very tight piece of bleak, hardboiled writing.Very tight piece of bleak, hardboiled writing.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-5925794018483572412011-06-20T14:36:03.610+01:002011-06-20T14:36:03.610+01:00A very visceral story, David. Felt like I was rig...A very visceral story, David. Felt like I was right there. "the ogreish sun" was a favorite line of mine.Mike Minernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-62893890155315318672011-06-19T21:54:06.322+01:002011-06-19T21:54:06.322+01:00Really enjoyed this, David. It had a bit of every...Really enjoyed this, David. It had a bit of everything; suspense, emotion and grittiness. Well done.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00231973272530266336noreply@blogger.com