tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post1752766098416856718..comments2024-03-08T08:13:52.256+00:00Comments on The Flash Fiction Offensive: The Spanish Lesson by Kieran SheaDavid Barberhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00231973272530266336noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-63550678230228842182010-10-15T16:17:58.386+01:002010-10-15T16:17:58.386+01:00Hey Bryon, if this is the bar you are setting, we&...Hey Bryon, if this is the bar you are setting, we're all in for a lot of trouble. Terrific story, Kieran. This is writing! Felt like I was reading a classic from Black Mask.Bruce Harrisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-14652349013137287982010-10-10T16:23:10.572+01:002010-10-10T16:23:10.572+01:00Does this guy ever write a bad story? Every word s...Does this guy ever write a bad story? Every word seems plucked from the heavens.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-28202543397260365662010-10-08T06:43:06.502+01:002010-10-08T06:43:06.502+01:00Started quiet, lovely description, I'm sucked ...Started quiet, lovely description, I'm sucked into pastoral vistas and then the ratchet starts. Usual inside views of the great American 7/11. He's got the upper hand/the bottom hand depending on who you're looking at.<br />Great race to the final. Outside to the machine. Shit, Spanish. Trying to get it done. The focus narrowing and narrowing until it pinpoints and then BLAM! Things . . . change. <br />Lotsa action narrowing to a pure crystal point. Very Cool!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-31886058421084581822010-10-04T01:18:52.516+01:002010-10-04T01:18:52.516+01:00Great tension, Kieran. Nice slow grind. Well done....Great tension, Kieran. Nice slow grind. Well done...Glenn Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14925047417101856802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-62037719598752443352010-10-02T22:41:10.972+01:002010-10-02T22:41:10.972+01:00What a beaut!What a beaut!Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1289201915273996479.post-66415291367488525572010-10-02T22:25:32.095+01:002010-10-02T22:25:32.095+01:00Yeah, this is the bar I'm setting for all futu...Yeah, this is the bar I'm setting for all future stories. Bring it big, kick my ass. Nice one, mateBryon Quertermoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18142740189973184854noreply@blogger.com